Software
to Edit Your Memos
The US Navy found
that writing memos in plain language would save around $300 million a
year. Apply StyleWriter's advice to your organization's communications
and you will save money and improve efficiency.
Original Memo
- before editing with StyleWriter
This typical memo
is wordy and passive, with a high average sentence length. Although no
sentence is excessively long, (38-26-32 words), the average of 31 is too
high for easy reading.
Redrafted
Memo - after editing with StyleWriter
StyleWriter's advice
and analysis helps us transform the passive and wordy memo into a shorter,
more readable document. The redrafted memo uses 27 fewer words than the
original without and loss of meaning. A sign of good, effective editing.
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